I thought it was pretty good actually, maybe inflect an pause more with certain phrases for effect? Think Vincent Price's dramatic readings. Good test though the tone was pretty much perfect.
Thank you, sir! I see where you're coming from with the pauses (or lack of, rather). I originally recorded this for an Instagram post (I kind of had to move it along because of the 15 second limit) so that definitely had an impact on what I could do in terms of timing. I will certainly keep that in mind for the future, though. Thanks again!
Great Demo! I like the idea of the skit meets showcase, nice work.
Very lovely, I am not familiar with the original track but this one has a great emotion to it; very somber. you present it with legitimate conviction as well very nice. The recording came out amazing, full and lively whatever you did write that down! thanks for posting the work!
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for letting me know. :]
Awesome. I love the sharp edges and rigidness of it. Great job.
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